After reading the reviews I’ve received, I’ve concluded that Servants of Man in it’s current form is not the best work I’m capable of writing. It was originally intended as part of a longer work, and it was a mistake to try to make it stand on it’s own. Therefore, instead of publishing a sequel called War in Heaven, as I previously announced, I will publish an expanded edition of Servants of Man which will include the events of War in Heaven. I’ve prepared a draft of this expanded edition, and I find it has a much more natural story arc with a more satisfying ending, as well as giving the reader more time to get to know Tiffany, Marisol, and their world.
I thank you all for your support, and I’m sorry I wasn’t able to put my best foot forward on my first try. I will be unpublishing the original novella soon, and hope to have the expanded edition available in August.